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Kise Ryouta from Kuroko no basket

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So I had this just sitting around waiting to be colored along with a Kuroko Tetsuya drawing so I decided to finish it. So I plan on practicing coloring clothes because Kecause Kise's jersey looks really messed up...... :icontiha90: decided to tag you because you got excited when I told you I was curently working on Kise, Judal, and Art                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                     Disclaimer: I do not own Kise Ryouta he is owned by Tadatoshi Fujimaki

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Canon MG5400 series Network
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:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

So, this is my very first critique ever to write:
First of all: The colouring of the drawing is pretty good!
The shading, especially on his shirt, looks really realistic and gives it plasticity.
Just the eyes could need some more of it <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w…" width="15" height="15" alt=";)" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="387" title=";) (Wink)"/>

Then the outlines:
The outlines of the eyes are stressing his look, make it seem more intense, I like that. Also the outline of the hair and ears are good, but I think you have overdone it a little bit with the outline of his cheeks.
And the outline of the shirt is missing completely. It isn't that bad, but it would create some sort of a "unity" in the drawing. I hope you get what I mean^^

Last but not least a little detail: His earring: Its size is matching his face, but I think it, too, could need some more shading. Especially because the hair, in reality, would make this region seem a bit darker.

So, I told you a lot of details, because it's a critique, and you really don't have to take me too serious, because all of them are only little things on which you could improve and all together, your drawing is just amazing (as I told you quite often already<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w…" width="15" height="15" alt=";)" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="387" title=";) (Wink)"/>)
I guess I can't give you credits for creativity as it is a fanart, but you drew it in a wonderful way!
Kuroko no basket can be happy to have such great fans ;D